Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, January 9, 2020
Cheesy Boy Band
Are you interested in Boy Bands? If so please comment below. i appreciate your feedback.
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Kia Ora Quinn,
ReplyDeleteI really like BTS as well. They’re so catchy and positive. It’s a nice change of pace in the music industry to see foreign acts making headway in places like America and Europe. They’re so energetic and different to the typical pop stars we see everyday. You’ve done a superb job summarising some cool facts about them and I like how you included a photo of them where you can see their happiness and great bonds.
I didn’t know that they all lived together. That’s so cool, it’d be like living with your best friends.
I would really appreciate if you could please increase the size of your text so it is a little bit bigger. This would appeal to your readers.
Ngā mihi maioha,
Shannon (SLJ)