Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Sunday, December 22, 2019
Concerning Cancer
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Kia Ora Quinn,
ReplyDeleteWow, you’ve done an incredible job summarising who the Cancer Society is and what they do. I like how you have included the fact that they care for those who have cancer as well as help prevent people from getting it, whether it be through early testing or spreading information about possible warning signs. It’s important when addressing a problem like this that you not only address the symptoms but also that you try and minimise the number of people who get it. This is done best by things like ads on TV telling you to use sunscreen or posters at the doctors telling you what to look out for.
Have you seen some of the advertising the Cancer Society has done for prevention? Perhaps you could tell me where you have seen it.
It would be really awesome if you could include pictures or colours into your post to really engage your readers. Perhaps you could look at these tips for making eye catching blog posts to help or grab some inspiration.
Happy holidays!
Shannon (SLJ)