Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, October 21, 2019
Wrong, wrong, wrong
Do you know what story they are trying to tell? If so please comment below. I appreciate your feedback.
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Hi Quinn It is me Sree I really liked the way you added a plan About the story.This reminds me from When I say something to my brother and he says wrong.Next time you could add some ore colours.
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